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Wednesday, June 28, 2006

The Pines


Fell from length,
with no purpose

but the thing
laid out. There was

a fire here,
the world held

blackening
to our breeze

through this geometry:
the cul-de-sac,

taken on
the domesticity of dogs,

exhorting cornsmut; they've
browsed
the life away

from these woods,
passing through.

They shimmy
to attention,

the new tilting
a little from the old.

Which were
those miles

and are,
were it all

encased
in a vivarium.

And reduced,
to be rebuilt.

Coarsened by need,
cut from avoidance.


I had a dream last week that partly contained the line breaks from this section of The Pines Vol 2. I reopened it to check it out today & saw all of my notes from teaching it this summer. They were so focused on the themes of the class, so defined by a linear was of understanding the "use" or "role" of fragmented poetry in the creation of a sense of self. Funny that the class discussion of The Pines was far more focused on the things I love about this volume, the beauty of the words & how this beauty relates to the sense of beauty & loss of the natural world. The relation is not referential but played out in the space between the fragments, the space between the word & that which it refers to & the understanding of how the word & image fills space & time.

1 Comments:

At 2:01 PM, Blogger Lori Witzel said...

Letting the fragments drift through, and must say this is the Best Post Combining Poetry and Paper Airplanes I've seen so far today.

Found you via NoTellMotel, and really do like your schtuff. Now, however...

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